– Still has a lot of meat in the bone, meaning that it could continue to be develop, there is still material and story

– As a bit of a shock between being an amazing erotic vn and a bad 3rd level porn in some parts – Good charaters, good base story, the development has its ups and downs, for the most part is good but should have been better in others

In terms of final avaliation i won’t give it a number i will say this: The endings are okay, but are a little void, for instant the Lisa ending, they just go for dinner, theres not something that says closer, like a wedding, is like an open ending. There are also some aparently abandom paths, again in the bedroom scene when Jade and Lisa saw the fotograph of mc and his mother, it looks like there could be some secret there who could have open a path for a non incest relation between mc and Julia and even maybe between mc and Rachel, could be fun and let’s face it Julia is an amazing charater, the same can be told about Nicole or Erica from NakedPark band. – also the mc’s mother, when his father is at the hospital, Julia says their father is sick for about six months and that the ones who knew about his hilness were, her, Marcus and the mother but in the bedroom scene between mc, Lisa and Jade, the mc says his mother is gone for two years – first the Lisa/Jade relation is known in one of the rehearsals and again in the rootop scene at Julia party, this is easy to fix, just change the dialogue in the rooftop scene to something like Jacob asks how there relation is doing, In terms of the story, there are some errors: To a girl and in 5 seconds, your mouth fuck her, deepthroat till gaggin, and the vulgar way mc speaks to his “oficial girlfriends” not like a man but a jerk/rapist, also in the Lisa/Jade path the threeway relation should be more smooth, because some times it looks like theres a more love relation between Lisa and Jade and just a sex relation between mc and the girls, not an equal relation between the three. There are some things that don’t match the characters in terms of dialogue and actions, like you just say “I love you” – and some strange body positions and strange body movements in some sex scenes,

– foreplay scene in the garden at Julias party, strange height of selina legs, – sex scene with Selina in her bathroom were her lingere changes from blue to red multilpe times, This is just my opinion as a player and it’s worth is what it is, this game as a lot of good thins, good charactersĪnd for the most part a good and fluid storyline.īut it also has some things that aren’t right, first there are some errors like:

J.u.l.i.a. among the stars mega